Your letter is littered with an alarming amount of
bureaucratese--"stringent criteria", "based on several factors",
"organisational needs" and "specific requirements". In fact I would
use it as a negative example in a classroom, to teach my students
against a kind of writing which is designed for obfuscation instead
of elucidation. I will point out to them how this very abuse of
language is what pollutes human interaction in our society, how it
forecloses any form of genuine dialogue. I respect the word, along
with its ability to convey truth and knowledge, and any attempt to
use it for contrary purposes I view with much distress.
If I was still a teacher, I would give your letter a failing
grade.
Yours sincerely,
Alfian Bin Sa'at
Wah, power.