oh.. totally forgot about this thread.. hope this isn't too
late.
1. i would post only photos that i think were nice. in this series,
their generally taken from the same spot so i'd just choose a
couple to post up.
2. when u look at the photos, where does ur eye focus on? the
trails? the sparodic lights? the barrier on the left of the frame?
(in a couple of the photos). i find that the photos are unable to
hold attention becos there's just so many things to look at.
3. traffic trails are better taken when there aren't so many
distracting lights around, generally speaking. of course, usually
where there's traffic there's street light. try a higher vantage
point like on top of an over head bridge and when there's more
traffic. also, u need some REAL streaks, which comes from having
more traffic, if not some of the photos look like the road, with
something blur going thru it.
4. there are some really wierd spots near where the lights are, i
can't tell if it's flare, or dust. take note of that. sometimes
flare just can't be helped, so it's good to take note where light
sources are in ur frame.
5. i'm sure u used a tripod, but i've seen sharper photos from ur
cam. did u use a cable release or the timer so that ur finger
doesn't move the camera when u depress the shutter?
ok that's that...
so when u getting ur dslr? 
