Lol, she kena suaned by by her 'public apology' ... 2 wrongs
doesn't make 1 right, huh ?
John Riemann Soong says
Spelling and grammar be not everything; for there be those who
discard the rules of prescriptive grammar and spelling to achieve
an effect.
It's the rhetoric that matters.
Shu Min:
"i would like to bring to your attention the fact that the post in
question was never meant to be a cogent response to the specific
points raised in derek wee's article"
Really! I seemed to have the impression that you would want to have
the largest audience possible to d'accord you. That would actually
be a good thing (writing with a purpose) if not for the fact that
you chose not to stick to your words. Prithee, it did not seem that
obvious that you did not think it had some cogency and that you
intended it to be a scathing criticism of the blog you attacked. I
would think a good rhetorical analysis of your post would reveal
otherwise.
Shall I break down your mistakes, comrade?
Firstly, "distress" is terribly euphemistic and impertinent to the
matter at hand. We are not distressed as much as we are
incensed.
Secondly, you contrasted a noun abstraction with a verb "to vent
frustrations" versus "public denouncement" - this is a rhetorical
error. A more effective writer would continue the use of the
infinitive.
Thirdly, a gross mistake was your misuse (and misconjugation) of
the preterite for the verb "arise". "Arise" is a class I strong
Germanic verb, do pay attention to the use of Indo-European ablaut.
"arose" is a preterite; "arisen" is the past participle you are
looking for.
Fourthly, "in irony" is awkward; "ironically" is the word you are
looking for. But that is not surprising, considering that you like
to hide yourself behind noun abstractions, and also omit
grammatical articles to try to achieve this effect. I suggest you
read George Orwell's "Politics and the English Language". You
desperately need it.
You think you're superior because you think you may have (that's
modal subjunctive to you) a superior command of English than most
Singaporeans. You think you're a language genius and have the edge
- but you can't even distinguish between the preterite and
particple Germanic ablauts of English, because you think the
preterite "-oh" vowel will give you the strong past tense you are
looking for. How can you survive lah?
You talk about irony, but oh the irony!