a little poem dat i wrote

aHGer^83 SG

ok...here's smtng i wrote...it just came out from my mind...i dunnoe how...
ok...here's how it goes...

Do i want you cos you are wonderful?
Or u r wonderful cos i want u?

do i love u cos i need u?
or i need u cos i love u?

This all seems to be confusing
But it is not as confusing as it may seems.

Love is patient, Love is kind.
Love is everything i have in u

All i really want is to hold u tight and treat u rite
And i love u cos i need u
and i want u cos u r wonderful.

the Bear SG

ahger in love? Smile

so sweet Smile

NeonTetra SG

clap clap is that a rap or what? haha…sounds ok

aHGer^83 SG

in love?...erm................................. Neutral

aHGer^83 SG

rap? erm...poem? Wink

the Bear SG

good effort Smile

keep at it, yah? not everyone does poetry these days

sometimes i dabble in poetry too.. however if it is personal, it's something i never share with anyone else except the subject... and sometimes she doesn't even see it...

but sometimes i just write... and leave it as it is in its raw form...

aHGer^83 SG

i dunnoe...juz hopes he sees it... Neutral

the Bear SG

if not, email to him Smile

or pull out a calligraphy pen and write it out, frame it and give as a present Smile

kopiosatu SG

... Neutral

aHGer^83 SG

wad? Neutral

Båseline SG

... Neutral Neutral Neutral Smile Very Happy Laughing

kopiosatu SG

sad leh

aHGer^83 SG

Neutral

kopiosatu SG

laugh somemore

aHGer^83 SG

den? cry? Neutral

Båseline SG

It says...
I'm looking... looking... smile cos it's meaningful... then laff at myself cos I wun be able to write poem lor. Confused

aHGer^83 SG

Rolling Eyes Laughing sometimes...u wun noe it until u try lor...writin poem is...for me is...writin wad im tinking...dat's all...

Båseline SG

I too may write something outta what I feel...but doesn't rhythm that all. Laughing

Båseline SG

Sorry Sergeant! Mr. Green