Nata|ie SG New writing with twist of plot. Kinldy leave some comments? Thankx http://www.sgforums.com/?action=post_display&post_id=1032764
jOhO SG hey~~ wonder wat the twist is? coming up in the next few parts? unless u're referring to a peson chasing another that's already married, in this society, that's no twist. it almost seems normal nowadays. anyway, well written, and i might say, ur lead characters have very unique names i was a little lost between the quick transition of van in her office with the flowers, then to raynor training his men, and then his memory of the night before. then i figured that's why he was "thinking about something else" in the car. ok continue writing i sure read one!
