These two sentences below are too mechanical and lack the
fluidity associated with comfortable speech, especially within a
Singaporean context.
Because
I had to love an Angel, who has better choices outside
me
I had to evade and sacrifice myself to a greater cause
Thats because I understand the theory behind giving the best for
the ones you love. I know I am not good enough, but what matters is
your happiness not mine. I will be as equally happy if my Angel
is similarly blessed by someone else.
They may be artistic in description, used as dramatic prose, but
I find them rather lacking for normal speech.
