Hi guys!
I'm helping to write an ad for an MLM seminar and I was wondering
what you guys would think if you saw an ad like this:
Lose 50kg in a week! Win trips!
Drink a magic juice and grow wings!
Does it seem to you that all network marketing presentations sell
you magic potions and promise you riches beyond your wildest
dreams?
It seemed that way to us.
Till we heard from a man who said what he meant, and did what he
said, and made US$27,000,000 helping people around the globe to
succeed. All with the only network marketing company that is listed
on the New York Stock Exchange and that publishes its
incomes.
You are exclusively invited to see a very unique and powerful
global business opportunity, explained by the man himself.
No bullsh*t, no arm-twisting, no locking the doors, no
obligations.
Just the facts of why this is the only network marketing
opportunity you will ever need. And a chance to join this mans
team and succeed where others have failed.
NATHAN RICKS LIVE!
ONE NIGHT ONLY
6 MAY 2004
6.45 9.00 PM
HOTEL NEW OTANI
TICKET PRICE: $10
Contact XXXXX at 9XXX-XXXX for more details.
Could you guys please give me some input about what other kinds
of information you would like to see in the ad?