Paiseh Paiseh My Lyrics

gasband SG

Just here to share some song lyrics I wrote and played with my band, not very talented so dun laff hehehe...

Some

Some are kind, some are cruel
some may be good, but others sat there.
Some are weak, some are strong
but when they fall, they wonder what is wrong.

The sun has set and darkness came.
Another day has passed by in vain.
If i could, i surely would
bring you to, see that God is true.

People fall in their pride
Men will kill and think they're right
Strife has put blood on his hands.
Men are never satisfied
Fame and power that they seek
have made them go down on their knees
and bow before this helpless world,
why cant they hear that Jesus cries?

Parka SG

Not bad.

I've seen worse. Razz

gasband SG

Table Of Candlelights

At the midnight hour, when the time is up
She is walking down, to that sinful town.
Holding in her hands, what should be in the dumps.

She confessed she's gone, from the place she was.
Looking to turn back, but I guess she's lost.
He is telling her, it has all been done.

Down at the table of candlelights.
You can see the brightness in the dark, thru the open eyes.
And when the rainstorms come, He says that its alright.
We hope you're coming here. where we're sitting now.
Down at the table of candlelights.

Seeking something new, in these troubled times.
Take me to the One whom we sacrificed.
It all seems confusing, thru our naked eyes.

laurence82 SG

Originally posted by gasband:
Just here to share some song lyrics I wrote and played with my band, not very talented so dun laff hehehe...

[b]Some

Some are kind, some are cruel
some may be good, but others sat there.
Some are weak, some are strong
but when they fall, they wonder what is wrong.

The sun has set and darkness came.
Another day has passed by in vain.
If i could, i surely would
bring you to, see that God is true.

People fall in their pride
Men will kill and think they're right
Strife has put blood on his hands.
Men are never satisfied
Fame and power that they seek
have made them go down on their knees
and bow before this helpless world,
why cant they hear that Jesus cries?[/b]

If you had done recording, maybe you can put it up like the sgGirls National Day Theme Song! Then we all can appreciate it better! Mr. Green

gasband SG

Hold Me

Say a little prayer, will you understand?
If i walk away, are you still the same?
If i run away, will you take me back?
When you come again, will that ease the pain?

Hold me in your arms again someday.
Hold me in your arms again someday.
Maybe I would find another way
But there's no other way.

Found an escapade, where you and me met.
How I wish to see, but I'm blind,
How about that?

Hold me in your arms again someday.
Hold me in your arms again someday.
Maybe I would find another way
But there's no other way.

Lord, I want to pray. That my heart will never stray.
I want you to stay and hold me in your arms again.

gasband SG

yeah we have but its too troublesome right now but will put it up on the web some day....and yes i think song lyrics unlike poems, need the music to compliment it...

s|nNeD SG

yeah let us hear it man... tell us when you perform in a sell out gig.
Mr. Green

gasband SG

errmmm....we are not yet prepared to sell out hahaha sell out crowd yes, but not a gig to sell out Mr. Green Twisted Evil

we have performed a number of times lah but due to time, we are cutting dowm alot in past 2 years...

gasband SG

any more comments, please do say lah….i dun mind one

MooKu SG

*nod nod nod* Mr. Green

MooKu SG

why not.. one day go cut an album.. heehee.

joeljuls SG

Its a good time to plan the genre of music you've selected for this song. It'll help fine tune the lyrics. You have some very good lyrics but still very jerky. I have a few suggestions but I was wondering if you mind if I share with you. Forgive me for intruding into your lyrics while I share my 2 cents worth of thoughts. If your band wishes to do some recording, I don't mind helping in some ways I think I can.

Some

Some are kind, others maybe cruel
some seem good, but many just sit there.
Some are weak, some are strong
but when they fall, they wonder what is going on.

Darkness dawns when sun sets west.
Another day has passed by in vain they stand.
If i could, i surely would
bring you to, see that God is true.

People fallen in their pride
Men have killed thinking they are right
Strife puts blood onto his hands.
Men are never satisfied
Fame and power always they seek
few had resist to go down on their knees
bowing before this helpless world,
why cant they hear that Jesus cries?
Why cant they see there's a blessed life
[/b][/quote]

joeljuls SG

I do like your other songs. More refine. Can I meet with you? How can i contact you?

I'm on some projects recently and I think your songs has potential. I'm not from a label or an agent. I just want to see young talents get featured in some ways I think in the near future.

MooKu SG

wow, projects? sounds important Mr. Green what kinda projects are they? Smile

joeljuls SG

I'll be working with Juvenile delinquents from schools on some heavy rock/broadway musicals depending on the type of students I'll be getting. It'll be an intergration of various art mediums. 2yrs to plan and train. It'll be more like a charity fund raising musical either given directly to our poor aged people or some organisation who are really doing real jobs for them.

I was wondering if people from this forum can eventually participate when I saw some of the lyrics written here. Its a good platform for many especially the naughty ones who are hopeless in studies to prove to their parents that they can do good in their lives. I intent to integrate rock music with world music. Of course with one or two involvement from Sg forum, we'll place our forum's credits in our posters. What do you think?

Currently we're facing a 51% increase in our Juvenile delinquent rates in singapore and gov agencies are helpless. We believe we have a certain solution to help these people.