Hi peeps, my storyboards are up, please give me feedbacks on
them
This is the song i've chosen to base my project on:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HacRaenDOGc
It is a C-pop, soft rock song that is written, composed and sang by
the late Taiwanese singer 张雨生.
Logline: Saved by a young man, the love-struck girl struggles to
confess to the guy she loves and misses her opportunity. A present
of love that was never delivered.
Synopsis: A young secondary school girl is depressed looking down
at a bow-tie in her hand on a gloomy raining afternoon. (Flashback
of her story begins outside of a school when she is saved by her
classmate from walking into the path of an oncoming car. She is
grateful and after they part, she picks up the bow-tie that was
dropped by the young man when he was trying to save her. After the
incident, they got closer and become good friends in class. Their
love for each other grows as they are hanging out together in
school. She shies away from the boy every time he tries to get
close to her and can only think about it in her bedroom playing
with the bow-tie. Weeks after, she finally summons her courage and
approach the guy after school on a rainy day. When she is about to
confess by returning the bow-tie, she is interrupted by a girl from
the other class and it turns out she has been going out with him
recently. She is dumbfounded as rapid images of the past fills her
mind revealing how she have missed her opportunities to the other
girl.) The flashback ends when it transits into the current time
(at the start of the video) where the bow-tie in her hand
transforms into a butterfly and guides her vision into the sky
above. The rain stopped and the sun shines through the clouds.
The storyboards(Prototype):
Legends:
LFA = Lead Female Actor
LMA = Lead Male Actor
SFA = Supporting Female Actor













And here is a poster art i've put together using character and
background arts courtesy of Emirri, Rzhevskaya and Skaotic.

And some visual images from Rainie Yang's 雨爱 MV and 九把刀's
那些年,我们一起追的女孩 used as reference for my music video.


Thank you for reading it through. Last but not least, i have a few
questions for the purpose of survey data collection. Please help by
answering it in your replies below.
1)Do you know the Singer 张雨生 or the Song 蝴蝶结? Do you like the
Song?
2)Did the story relates to your experience or memories?
3)Do you think that the emotions and feelings you get from the song
matches the story?
4)Did you think the distinctive use of different color mood for
different scenes makes the storytelling more engaging?
5)Would you recommend or share this MV to your friend?
Thanks and Cheers :D