Hocklez SG I noticed something this week Never thought it was big deal Place the thing behind my mind Never had this cross my mind I know your faith and trust in And now u gave up Started your second That is a shock Hope, you are still the one I have always known Unknown, yes I am Puzzled, yes u should Question in my mind Answer me To show my existance I am always who i am To who u are
DeadPoet SG Originally posted by Hocklez: I noticed something this week Never thought it was big deal Place the thing behind my mind Never had this cross my mind I know your faith and trust in And now u gave up Started your second That is a shock Hope, you are still the one I have always known Unknown, yes I am Puzzled, yes u should Question in my mind Answer me To show my existance I am always who i am To who u are Main message of the poem?
Joyce SG ehh.. i dun get it.. anywayz u no wad.. i so darn like poems!! i jux cant score in dem.. oh wellz, i dunno.. so far i jux had my FIRST and ONLY unseen poem test.. and yay.. i passed by one mark..
Hocklez SG i am not talented in writting poem, ask deadpoet if u don believe, my first poem was posted in his forum and was in a complete mess... jus my feeling... noting much... haizzz
Hocklez SG i donno how la... unless u consider tt one... lol... Eg. Heaven and earth will pass away... But my love for u will nv... ( this is some phrase me and my friend edited out of boredom lol...)
