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ironoxideman SG

its another ugly day
laughs
thinking how close tears are
to happiness and pain
another ugly day
(hahahaha)
reaches for the phone and turns away
(blah ahahaha and its nothing to talk about)

it is a nice place
and full of good people
but i'm just cursed...

i love you all Bye Bye.

another ugly day
(hahahaha)
sits up on the chair and goes out the door

starts the car
hits the highway
and hesitates...
a nice car
because it is a very nice car,
and a shame to waste it.

InnoHippo SG

planning a suicide? Rolling Eyes

DeadPoet SG

I hope not. Sad

But I like the way the author arranged the lines. The ending also quite unexpected. Wink

Bluesky_Liz SG

At least the end is a little optimistic. I get like that sometimes, sometimes a week or month is just so bad, and one feels most rejected by all. I get like, I would jump off this building, but I don't want to make a mess downstairs and the poor nice uncle will have more work...

Seriously, sometimes you grasp at whatever keeps you around, even stuff that seems rather trival and it even sounds kinda funny.

DeadPoet SG

Shocked Shocked Shocked

Bluesky_Liz SG

It sounds funny if you've never been down deep in the pit. But to me, it's a small step in avoiding a total surrender. Oh yes, I had those and darker thoughts when I was younger. These days I've learnt to be a bit more easy about stuff, just do my best.
Cool

InnoHippo SG

jumping off a building is such an "ugly" end .........

never never take this option ........ Mad

tare SG

same here.... was so bad i just wanna jump. then i thot of my dog. no one to take care of him. no one will even noe he's alone at home!! Shocked

so no jump Laughing

DeadPoet SG

Shocked Shocked Shocked

DeadPoet SG

Dont jump. Come see me, I give you counseling. Very Happy