expiringpoet SG I had a vision of love as perfect as diamonds and pearls and crimson rosebuds with lips shying to bloom. Its other face -poison and cataclysm. I wish to fall in love with the shy stranger on the train going nowhere. To feel the clichéd trails of emotions that everyone professes to have felt but could find no adequate words to express how and from where it came To experience the magic that comes out of communication that needed no words but a shared understanding in a pregnant glance Feeling that odd pulse of desire and the sorrow in knowing that life will never be the same thereafter I dream of the love that bleeds my heart dry, that makes the very flesh ache The love that when it leaves, feels like a million violent shards is there in place of what used to be me.
Bluesky_Liz SG Yeah. Don't we all wish for hollywood or bollywood romances sometimes? I don't doubt that something like the stuff in movies do exist somewhere in the world, probably have to be really really lucky.
choco B SG Oh I think the highs are simple enough to find and experience. The hollywood romances don’t prepare you for the lows and blows though .
expiringpoet SG Dont have to go Hollywood or India, too darn far. Try hanging around the squash courts in Safra, Tampines. Lately i've noticed a growing number of good-lookers there! Oooops! hope I dont sound like a pimp!
expiringpoet SG choco B, I do recommend you watch the Julie Delpy and Ethan Hawke movies, Before Sunset and it's prequel. It's stimulating, intelligent, funny and sad. It's very real. One of the best movies to come out of Hollywood in a long while.
DeadPoet SG Regarding your poem I think there are quite a few interesting phrases such as lips shying to bloom, clichéd trails of emotions, odd pulse of desire, etc. Well done!
tare SG but they definitely won't smell good leh and i doubt i look alive after a game of squash.... so no pt gog thr to scare ppl lah, less trying to start a hollywood romance
expiringpoet SG We should all take a healthy interest in our surroundings rite? Also, good information should be shared. I'm not selfish
expiringpoet SG she goes for the whole package thing lah! Must look good, smell good, feel good..heehee...
