HELP with sentence structuring!!

Devil1976 SG · 2007-02-09T18:29:23+00:00

too bad, she died a old lonely death, despite being chio bu.

Devil1976 SG

Seems like SPACE doesn't really work in SGFORUMS.. Sometimes find it HARD to truly express my poems especially of its layout...

Any help with that? Rolling Eyes

stellazio SG

eh u compose somewhere else, den print ss lohz..

Ito_^ SG

huhwadutokingspaceworksperfectlyfine Mr. Green

Darkness_hacker99 SG

yalorspaceworkingfineleh Laughing

Darkness_hacker99 SG

MYCAPSISWORKINGFINETOO Laughing

Devil1976 SG

So troublesome... Then I might as well put it up elsewhere...? Rolling Eyes

But it's not really like I would bother to lah...?

The man who was death SG

use...........for spacing Mr. Green

Bluesky_Liz SG

What he said, then change the font color to white. Cool

MoonIce SG

pity no hidden mode Mr. Green

Ito_^ SG

Laughing u can always type ur stuff in paint or any image editing program den save as image lor.

like this..

Mr. Green

DeadPoet SG

Everything okay now brother? Very Happy

DeadPoet SG

What does that mean?

Devil1976 SG

Kinda cool! Mr. Green

DeadPoet SG

Now then you know ah? You need to post more my friend. Laughing

Devil1976 SG

I like the combination of their ideas! Shall try if I come across them again next time? Mr. Green

~Devil sits and wait for inspirations.....~

DeadPoet SG

Why not? Mr. Green

Ito_^ SG

Colour of the flower
Has already faded away,
While in idle thoughts

My life passes vainly by,
As I watch the long rains fall.

not i translate or write one, i juz copy n paste for my blog layout only. Laughing

DeadPoet SG

Looks like a tanka to me. Hmm I wonder who wrote it. Wink

Ito_^ SG

ya it is.. pai seh. neber giv credit. ono no komachi wrote it.

DeadPoet SG

Thanks! I go search for more of her poems. Mr. Green