Hello Lazer! Here are my comments. 
Will you race with me
Even when the road
Splits up
Narrows down
Splices our vision
and makes us belch?
I like Splices our vision. I think Splices also goes very well
with Splits and belch.
Did you turn down
a path of uncertainty?
A road leading nowhere
or somewhere
perfectly random
like the timekeeper's bell?
Do you think this would sound better?
A road leading somewhere
or nowhere
Have you gone
from my sight
down a road
I could never follow?
I am not so sure about this stanza. Maybe beef it up a bit?
I'm stuck in
a pit-lane.
Waiting.
For a crackle
on the radio
that will never
come.
Nice ending although I would prefer to rearrange the lines in a
different manner.
Thanks for sharing Lazer, good to read your poem again. Hee
hee.
