DarkClouds SG The Drifter And it rained on an autumn night Cold winds blowing across the barren farmland Animals kept in their pens MothersÂ’ tales entertaining the young children Came knocking on a door A peculiar young man did Clad in an old yellow raincoat With a smile on his face Good day to you young lass, he said Would you mind me borrowing your fireplace? The winds have chilled my bones And I got no place I can call home
Bluesky_Liz SG Hm... and what happens next? It seems to beg a longer tale. Does she let the stranger in? Is he handsome? Does he behave? Clan in an old yellow raincoatI think you mean "clad".
DarkClouds SG Opps. yepp edited it already. thanks! Well, what you said made sense but i prefer it open ended. Leave it up to the reader to decide and imagine for himself/herself! But again, i might continue the tale when i have some new inspiration! [/quote]
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