Jason's writings of proufoundly intruiging nonsense!

last SG · 2006-05-14T21:02:44+00:00

You can join us once you are back in Singapore. Good luck in your exam!

dsnake1 SG

ahhh, the world's doing just fine here also.
got a whole long day in the office, excuse me while i go catch a bus. Mr. Green

jasonification SG

imagine words without meaning
and songs without tune
imagine light without brightness
and craziness without loon

imagine laughter without glee
and passion without fire
imagine people without souls
and cables without wires

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okay, i was just testing your imagination:]. this was a pretty lame attempt i admit. but imagine how whacked out a world like that would be T-T.

Cenarious SG

stop embarrassing urself.

jasonification SG

Dear sir/madam cenarious,

frankly, i don't really care if your dad is a stag, but if u have anything really constructive to say, please elaborate, rather than just saying "stop embarrassing urself." thanks ^^

jasonification SG

*ahem*
anyway, back to poetry, gonna take something from my blog again:

betrayed by my imagination,
i believed in myself more than i should
and the sugar plum faeries that dance in my head
were just rotting apples painted with red.
it's not a vivid imagination that brings you down the most
but an imagination that gives you hope
beyond what's realistically simply true.
it's more than thoughts of exaggeration
or of mind boggling weirdness.
that's what this poem appears to be
and that's what it is.

ceecookie SG

Jason's the admin here

DeadPoet SG

WTF is this all about?

jasonification SG

no idea ma'am! Confused

KittynMeow SG

welcome to DPS, jasonification. Smile

I dunno... but i read the few you've posted here and most of them sound more playful than conjuring a strong image in my mind. watch out for the over abundance of cliches and the temptation to play with words too much... Smile

jasonification SG

i would've posted something for the poem competition..but i don't think this is good enough:] got a lot to improve on:

Long shadows play along the ground
The sand between our toes
The whistling of the wind in our ears

As words don't play a part in what we say
More of the feeling of the moment
And the vast beauty of the coast.

Breaths intermingle with the salty mist
As two hands grip each other tightly
And as the waves tickle feet, once dry

Time was an eternity
And light was our salvation
That summer
With my grandpa and I.

jasonification SG

ah, time to break of this long hiatus with more nonsense...

orange leaves on the sycamore tree
the violet hues of the morning glory fade
and wind settles into a melancholy tune
amidst fog figures move silent, unknowingly
no regard, no words spoken

hark, a beam of light
the intensity a warmth of hope
look to the sky in amazement, wonder and with blurry fear
only to realise
we're all human

Devil1976 SG

Laughing

jasonification SG

rising on the wings of the fallen
and standing amidst the dead
their eyes they stare
and lips part to murmur

"curse ye who walks among the living
for ye knows nothing about life
until ye are dead"

and so i hide behind steel doors
under the security of guards
in my kingdom, my keep

then a fair maiden,
clad in her night gown
kisses my forehead
and tucks me in
my teddy, my blanket, and i

sorry this poem's a bit choppy...kind of hard to piece it together.

dsnake1 SG

hi jasonification,
kind of hard to figure what you are trying to convey, but i have a rough picture. It's about a little kid who had woken up from a nightmare of medieval warfare (too many fairy tales?) and his mother came in to comfort him. . Is it? Mr. Green

jasonification SG

yehhhh! and his guard is his teddy bear and the blanket is his fortress:]

DeadPoet SG

Laughing

jasonification SG

omg. 1000 views! woot. aaaanyway, i’m in USA right now soooo….^^

DeadPoet SG

What are you doing over there?

trendz SG

you love to rhyme your words. sounds pretty okay. use more profound words which contain subtlety.

jasonification SG

was visiting my bros…and my 4 month old nephew..now i’m back in school..oh btw, just in case it’s like, bad or something…i’m studying in australia now O_O. sorry for the non poems..i haven’t slept in 24 hours due to jetlag and i’ve got a ton of assignments. sigh.

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