LazerLordz SG part-timer. sixty percent of me still thinks you're a girl, interrupted and here I am trying to fix that cable which connects you to this world. am I trying or is this a dream a waking smile which I recall vaguely, in a way like simplicity raises a question about life. who's?
SingaporeMacross SG im having some difficulty in diciphering this one.. is this about a part timer trying to make a sales pitch? or a suitor doing self promotion?
LazerLordz SG It’s about the same guy who think hard, and he thinks a part of him might still be pushed to like her enough, if she lets him into her mind again.
expiringpoet SG After your explanation, then i see it what you're trying to say- in certain parts of the poem. I guess you need to enforce the imagery you're using further. So, the cable you're trying to fix in 'this world' , is 'this world' your world?