Originally posted by KittynMeow:
[b]Paper Cranes
One for the day when we first met,
Two for days we spend as friends.
Three for days of fun and laughter,
Four for days of chatting till the days end.
Five for weeks of meeting for movies,
Ten for weeks of outings and dining.
Fifteen for weeks of deeper understanding,
Twenty for weeks of knowing each others mind.
Ten for months of wondering if theres more,
Twenty for months of being unsure.
Thirty for months of honeymoon coupledom,
Forty for months of just being together.
Twenty for the hours we spent apart,
Forty for the hours doubt left its mark.
Sixty for the hours tears fell on their own,
Eighty for the hours of knowing it's not meant to be.
And five for the loving memory of the one we love most,
365 paper cranes in a bottle.
I know i know... its full of cliches etc... but that's what
exercise is for... practice!! kekeke... anyway, was just trying to
be clever with words and numbers... heh....[/b]
Nice read Kitty.
Just a suggestion, why not rearrange it to hours, days, weeks,
months instead of the current days, weeks, months, hours
arrangement?
Or maybe you have a reason for the current arrangement? 