Tis the season to be writing..Christmas Poetry Competition!!

_Aaron_ SG

Christ was born on this day
Hope and faith is here to stay
Rest well, little one
In the cosy comforts of the Virgin Mary
Satan foiled, curses uttered
To the highest points of heaven
Many cried and gave their thanks
As they looked down on this day
Satan foiled, Christ to stay~

Hmm. The best i could come up with in 2 minutes ^_^

KittynMeow SG

Originally posted by _Aaron_:
Christ was born on this day
Hope and faith is here to stay
Rest well, little baby
In the cosy comforts of the Virgin Mary
Satan foiled, curses uttered
The highest points of heaven shuddered
Many cried and gave their thanks
As over kings and power Jesus rank
Souls saved, God's children on Eternity's bank.

kekekeke.... thot that making it rhyme would sound nicer... hope you don't mind.... Razz

_Aaron_ SG

Good work.

No i don't mind, i know i was never good at poetry to start with ^_^

KittynMeow SG

now that's a lie... it was good to begin with.... i was just modifying it because of my preference for poems that rhyme.... Very Happy Mr. Green

tare SG

and u complain u ain't good? u wrote tat in 2mins leh... faster than instant noodles liao!!! Mr. Green

DeadPoet SG

Totally different from LazerLordz. Very Happy

For me I anything also can as long after reading it makes me go 'WA'!!! Mr. Green

True_Xerion SG

hmm okok, here's my contribution, dun laff too hard k? Embarassed

Met so many this past year,
Early one morn
Real faces appear
Running late i was
You were early cuz u lived so near!

Chinese New Year,
H.O.F.S.
Ran WLDH.
I was but a babe in the woods
Seeing all & Hong's coming of age!
Then there were
Mao Tou Yings
Always flitting always flirting
Seemingly sleepless, always near.

Suddenly the world seems such a perfect place
Great choice of a fave song
For a lass of good taste!
Ohh hark hear the angels sing!
Ruminate the year gone by
Undo your wrongs or don't change a thing?
Mayhaps 'tis why we're here,
Surfing sgForums to get an idea!

TX

KittynMeow SG

hehehe cool.... Cool

_Aaron_ SG

Meow.

If i give it 20 minutes, at most a few minor adjustments only...
I can't seem to rhyme for some reason. lol~

KittynMeow SG

hahaha like you said before, there are good poems that don't rhyme... so it doesn't really matter does it...??

the_don SG

Originally posted by True_Xerion:
hmm okok, here's my contribution, dun laff too hard k? Embarassed

Met so many this past year,
Early one morn
Real faces appear
Running late i was
You were early cuz u lived so near!

Chinese New Year,
H.O.F.S.
Ran WLDH.
I was but a babe in the woods
Seeing all & Hong's coming of age!
Then there were
Mao Tou Yings
Always flitting always flirting
Seemingly sleepless, always near.

Suddenly the world seems such a perfect place
Great choice of a fave song
For a lass of good taste!
Ohh hark hear the angels sing!
Ruminate the year gone by
Undo your wrongs or don't change a thing?
Mayhaps 'tis why we're here,
Surfing sgForums to get an idea!

TX

Embarassed muack muack

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