LazerLordz SG I am silent. Like a barnacle out of the water Like a man stuck in a rave disco with cops around him Like the minute dust gathered on a lunar probe abandoned decades ago Like the citizen who has served his time but not given his natural dues.
DeadPoet SG Hmm... a hint of political touch in this short poem. Let me try to write one starting 'I am silent' also. I am silent Like legendary generals Surrounded by death Though victorious in battles But defeated in life What glory? What honour? When there is no one close To say goodbye?
eskyhastofall SG Like a man stuck in a rave disco with cops around himWhy is this interpreted as silent? Tell me why~ Like the citizen who has served his time but not given his natural dues.what you think are the dues? Money or a medal? Served his time, as in NS?
DeadPoet SG Actually LazerLordz will not answer any question in this thread. Read the first line of the poem.
