She Fills The Light

LeftBallBigger SG

Let your mind free
Think of the number zero
Think of zero in all its nothing
Think of a 3d blank
There is nothing there

She comes into the light
her body fills the zero
do you see her
you must for she fills every space

You love her
you lust her
you want her
your life is but for her

Shes the living dream
The dream you are blessed with
Never forget this dream

LazerLordz SG

Quite simple yet sharp and clear piece of work.Let's see more from you. Razz

LeftBallBigger SG

Thanks for your kind comments!
My poetry suxs i think..
But trying to dabble a bit ...

Cheers

DeadPoet SG

I do agree with LazerLordz. You poem are simple and straight to the point. Clearly you have your own style of writing. I can also see that you are a very creative person. Your poems offer a different/fresh perspective to the readers. Very Happy

But a word of caution, some readers may not be able to accept them. But dont take it personally, it is YOUR poems. So continue to write and develop your skills. Well done.