Originally posted by serash:
ya,i have a new poem.its actually a happy one~~ well i hope
it is to you.So please correct me cos i want this poem to be
perfect cos its dedicated to someone.. 
btw,i'm wondering i should use "she" or "you"?btw,haven
thought of the title...what abit Dreams?
[b]*~ Dreams
~*
Dreaming of her,
i always have,
waking up in hope,
for she will be there,
but life is never,
simple it may seem,
for hope vanishes,
with every minute ticks.
A love cocoon,
so thick and strong,
built with tender,
and ever-lasting faith,
but never before,
i thought this way,
when the shield depletes,
and slowly fades.
i questioned my love,
where are you?
for you promised long ago,
protect me,
always
A warm voice heard,
familiar it is,
words sank deep,
providing comfort and relieve.
Oh my dear,
grandchild of mine,
the shield is still there,
just not in the light.
in my mind it will remain,
in my heart,
it stays.
Dreams of her,
forever it shall be,
for it is the only way,
she will be with me.
in my heart she's always there,
in my dreams,
she live.[/b]
Hey serash nice write. You are getting better. 
Tell you what, I will try to rewrite this poem and see if you like
it.
What do you think? 
