OMG iveco, now its really hard to follow my story

The.raven's version
continued:
starblue ran and ran, finally free. the feeling of freedom was
exilarating. Finally she was too exhausted to continue, and he
collapsed in a heap.
"Run Starblue, run!!" Krobeen's words sounded again in her mind,
she was so touched by Krobeen's selfless act. She gazed forlornly
at the darkening sky and wondered if she would ever meet Krobeen
again. She prayed that Krobeen had survived the malicious
the.raven.
the two younger men charged at Krobeen, each of them using a whip
like weapon. they swung their whips in unison, and were obiously
well trained in their style of combat. their whips seemingly alive,
like two snakes snapping their jaws at Krobeen. Krobeen had never
faced such a combat style, in fact, the farm boy had never faced
any kind of combat style before, and he was driven back easily,
having a hard time dodging the whips, his face bruised with a hit
from one of the whips. He heard a continual ring of steel from the
side, and he turned just a moment to look at the fight between
the.raven and the.owl.
Not all the adventure tales Krobeen had ever heard could prepare
him for the sight before him. Never in his dreams did he visualise
such a titanic battle between two extremely skilled swordsmen. But
his distraction was cut short as a whip hit him on his stomach and
he grunted in pain, concentrating again on his own fight.
the.owl feinted a thrust at the.raven, who easily brushed it away,
then followed with one of his own thrusts, which the.owl lifted up
high with his left sword, and his right sword slashing cunningly at
the.raven's exposed side. seemingly exposed, for the.raven deftly
blocked the.owl's slash with his left sword, as if he expected
the.owl's trick. the.owl grinned, "not bad, my friend, our minds
are ever so alike, even though we are on opposing sides now."
the.raven sneered and slashed his right sword across, then followed
with the momentum and spun around a complete circle, bringing his
left sword across in a wide graceful sweep. the.owl jumped then
ducked, as agile as the.raven, then did a flurry of slashes at
the.raven, who nimbly leapt back and dodged.
Krobeen was hard pressed by the two young men, his rusty sword
slapped off his hand by one of the whips. The fight suddenly came
to an end as one of the men wrapped his whip around Krobeen's neck
while the other trippsed Krobeen's legs with his whip, causing him
to fall the the ground, strangled.
the.raven panted with exhaustion. He was after all a middle aged
man, and his stamina was waning. For some reason, the.owl seemed to
be getting the upper hand.
"your swordsmanship have improved, or is it because of your new
sword?" the.raven noted, refering to the.owl's gleaming green
sword.
"Its called Green Destiny, I got it from another world by slaying
some crouching tigers and hidden dragons." the.owl grinned proudly,
"how do you like it?" he said, and as if to accentuate his point,
he chopped the.raven's right sword in half.
surprised but not caught unprepared, the.raven continued fighting
with one sword, but was broken again by Green Destiny.
"you would not have beaten me without that sword of yours."
the.raven said with a scowl. TO which the.owl replied with a grin,
"dont be a sore loser."