Looking outside my window,got bird and boy. Boy eat bird, bird
die. I see a rainbow outside. It was very colourful. I am happy
because it is very beautiful. I see children playing with balls
outside. All kind of balls. Football, basketball, baseball,
volleyball....
My mom and dad come into my room and sit beside me on my bed.
They look outside the window too. My mom is sitting on my right and
dad is sitting on my left. They are happy that I am happy.
Suddenly, some sparrows flew past. Our family dog then jumped out
of the window to catch some birds.
Our dog is a very active dog. He eats a lot. He is an active dog
who eat a lots. This is why he is active. However, he is not a very
clever dog because he is mad. When he jumped out of the window to
catch the birds, he forgot that our family lives on the twenty
fifth floor. Dog die. Me sad.
This is a bad day for me looking outside the window because I am
sad. I am sad because my parents just bought the dog yesterday. We
are sad. Suddenly an aeroplane flies past the window. We forget
about our dog and very surprised because we never seen an aeroplane
before. As a result, we are happy because the aeroplane is
exciting.
My mom is talking to me, but i continue looking out the window.
She screams, but i still look outside the window. I am deaf because
of the large sound from the aeroplane. We are sad again, buy happy
because the rainbow is still in the sky.
This is an exciting day outside my window.
I still remember this ''essay'' from quite a no. of forums (
including asiasoft forums ).
It was said that this was originally written by a Pri School
Malaysian boy, though I cannot verify that.
