CAN YOU CORRECT MY ENGLISH PLEASE ? (I AM FRENCH)

Mariekram SG

Hello, I'm French and I have an english homework. Can you correct my english please ? Thank you !

A STUDY OF THE VICTORIAN SOCIETY THROUGH
THE WORKS OF CHARLES DICKENS
(nineteen century)

During the Victorian era, the middle class grew quickly. Moreover, the social divide was very important ( To illustrate this gap, the underworld was characterized by child labour who hardly existed in the ruling class ) so political and social reforms were created to bridge the gap. For example, the Reform Act created in 1832 helped the democracy through the right to vote : it extended the franchise to include those who did not own landed property. Furthermore, concerning the right to vote, many women activist supported feminism.

British Empire was the foremost global power at that time. It was probably the greatest empire the world has ever seen. Personal and material success were very common. The industrial revolution has a major role in this phenomenon : discoveries ( scientific discoveries like Darwin's origin of species, in medicine, in the railway system, in the coal mines... ), rational improvements, cultural and architectural diversity contributed to the growth of the UK. Among cultural progress,
we can mentioned fantasy, gothic, detective, realism, romanticism, symbolism and mysticism as current notions or literary genres. A very famous book was Wuthering Heights written by Emily Brontë in 1847. There were also other writers such as Oscar Wilde with his book the Picture of Dorian Gray.

At that time, Great-Britain depicted wildness, loneliness and individualism. There were also many common beliefs : To British people, someone who knew a material success was someone who had a stable moral life, the underprivileged and the destitute were not educated to belong to the world, predestination and dark powers were real facts ...

notes: replace "actually" with probably, because it is not a proven fact. It is an opinion of the writer.

All the Best! SG

English,... What was u told to write.

a mugger SG

During the Victorian era, the middle class grew rapidly. The social divide among the Victorians was significant.To illustrate this gap, the underworld was characterized by child labour who hardly exist in the ruling class so political and social reforms were created to bridge the gap. For example, the Reform Act created in 1832 helped the democracy through the right to vote : it extended the franchise to include those who did not own landed property.Furthermore, concerning the rights to voting, many womens' activists supported feminism.

British Empire was the foremost global power during this period of time.Personal and material success were ubiquitious. The industrial revolution has a major role in this phenomenon discoveries,scientific discoveries like (Darwin's origin of species),in medicine, in the railway system, in the coal mines, rational improvements, cultural and architectural diversity contributed to the growth of the United Kingdom(UK).

We can mention fantasy, gothic, detective, realism, romanticism, symbolism and mysticism as current notions or literary genres. This is seen where a great number of books are published within the UK.A very famous book was Wuthering Heights written by Emily Brontë in 1847. There were writers such as Oscar Wilde with his book the Picture of Dorian Gray.This signifies the developments of literacy within the Victorian Age.

At this time, Great-Britain depicted wildness, loneliness and individualism. There were also many common beliefs : To Britains, material possession was attributed to success, whilst the underprivileged and the destitute were to be shunned aside.Predestination and Dark powers exist extensively throughout the UK.

Removal of brackets:The most common use of brackets is to enclose explanatory matter that one adds in editing the work of another writer. They indicate that some kind of alteration has been made in the original text.

Brackets:Bracket the whole scientific discoveries if Darwin managed to influence medicine and railway systems,which is not the case.

Literature refers to written works (e.g. fiction, poetry, drama, criticism) that are considered to have permanent artistic value. Popular culture refers to mediums such as film, television, fashion trends, or current events that have artistic value.