Hey! You know for question three in paper 1, i Think my story is
kind of out of point.
My story is like a boy lost his arms and became depressed as he
could not achieve his dreams in becoming a famous pianist (which
his parents hoped for..but i took it as a problem) So his parents
were also upset and helped him etc. so the boy decided to move on
and not zi bao zi qi and so on..so in the end he managed to make
his parents proud by ...................... yes i know im so dead.
:'(((((((
Comments? Will the marks get affected to the extent i'll get 25 and
below??? >.<
hey i don't think you went out of topic! it's correct because he
made an important decision to move on but if you emphasized on the
period where he had to choose between living in his unhappiness or
moving on in his life i think it'll be better :)