What were your 2 examples for the Wheelchair man question? Mine
was the school, kena bullied but succeeded and the university, kena
looked down on but succeeded.
2 e.g. for me is the kena bullied in school and university combined
into one, and then the wheelchair kena stuck during the competition
as the second
原因 i wrote that parents may be bad examples, schools nvr focus
on moral ed, and parents may just raise but not teach values
letting children get influenced by frens. 后果 i wrote that the
enviroment may be polluted allowing spread of germs, uglifying the
enviroment causing less tourism. However my hou guo was written
also in both the sense of if people continue littering and the
measures are not put in place. 建议 was the revamping of ed system,
parents shld instill values, putting up of notices n
dustbins. Points ok?
But i think my prob was that i used too much of the word 措施. Is
that unacceptable?
Extra paras included the why the govt needed to implement this
措施 and what would happen if they didn't. Anyone have comments for
me?
Edit: For the wheelchair man qn, i wrote that 他拥有不放弃的精神。To
explain was his perserverance in med sch, and his wheelchair race.
Is the wheelchair race a correct example? Coz its explaining his
"not giving up".
1. 原因 I wrote parents bad examples and school never focus on
moral education, but for the last one is they do it for their sake
of convienience and are selfish, because they don't care about how
other people think. Your's should be fine also
2. 后果 I wrote will affect Singapore's name as "Garden City" and
may affect tourism industry. According to my teacher you should
also put in the punishment given in the question as a
consequence
3. My 建议 is about the people needing to change their selfish
mindset and should think of others before they act. Also, the
parents should be good role models for their children and
that the school need to care more about the moral education of the
students.
4. As for your 措施 it may not be correct. I am not sure; best to
ask your teacher the next time you see her/him
5. For the wheelchair man, I said he is very 坚强. The e.g. I
used is underneath the first quote
