doubts on chinese

yiha093 SG

halo ! got qn.

when u write the reasons for the bao zhang bao dao , do u write the sayings 1st then explain or explain enforced by the sayings ?

i asked a teacher, she say its wrong, but i see hao zhuo wen got that style. how? ._.

FireIce SG

describe current situation + reasons
个人方面
家庭方面
学校方面 / 社会方面

suggest 解决/改善方法
个人方面
家庭方面
学校方面 / 社会方面

conclusion: all must work together to solve the problem
the must-use term -- 多管齐下

yiha093 SG

halo. what u said i noe

what i wanna noe is, How to incorporate the sayings into my reasons/ suggestings/ do i put saying 1st followed by reasons or reasonings followed by sayins? ?

btw need effects also. x )

dkcx SG

I think sayings 1st then u explain it with ur reasons

FireIce SG

wat sayings?

yiha093 SG

i do cher say must put behind............ omggggggggggggggg howwwwwwww .

Forbiddensinner SG

i do cher say must put behind............ omggggggggggggggg howwwwwwww .

Don't tell me you have only 1 chinese teacher in the whole school?

Ask the other chinese teachers first, then conclude whether your teacher is right or not.

hiphop2009 SG

You can do it either way ba.

Most important, it must look logical to you. You can ask around.

yiha093 SG

halo guys ! asked my china fren le, she suggests i write behind because i dun really noe how to link the things together ; ; thnks~~~~~~~

FireIce SG

do u mean 所谓 <insert act-cheem 谚语 here> ???

shd be in front. start of the para.

but dun put for the sake of putting.

i relli hate these "factory-produced" 作文 where everyone memorise and use those standard lines and phrases.
u can pass but u wun get A.

brainerror SG

Anti- Chinese kid.
sorry i no speak chinese.

Forbiddensinner SG

Anti- Chinese kid.
sorry i no speak chinese.

Zzzzz....homework forum cannot spam one, will die der....

brainerror SG

i did not spam -.-

eeden. SG

the sayings can put anywhere,as long as it's appropriate for the situation.most of the time it will be when making suggestions.habitually i'll put it at the first line,but it's up to you where you wanna add the saying.

yiha093 SG

lol. at least got hua long dian jin ma. haha !

lol . i figure i would prefer putting the idiom to enforce my explain . the teacher i asked marks O lvl script , so i guess i better folo what she suggests... hais, hate it, doing it for the sake of marks....... but no choice x.x

FireIce SG

sometimes is 画蛇添足

SBS n SMRT SG

lol. at least got hua long dian jin ma. haha !

the reality is...all chinese teachers mark o level script

[email protected]_F3V3R SG

the reality is...all chinese teachers mark o level script

XXX ERROR XXX

not ALL chinese mark script...

only ONE/TWO from each school...

my cn cher is HOD, so i know XD

brainerror SG

calling me?

[email protected]_F3V3R SG

calling me?

PS... not calling u actually...

aiya... now... i so scared lor...

btw, what compo u all doing?

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