Help me check my english mistake

Kim kwee SG

Hi Teacher In-Charge,

I,Ali ba ba, parent of obma from sec 4c has consent that my child will not be attenting his basketball traning for saturday.The reason is that he is having tuition on saturday and i am unable to change the timeslot.If you have any enquires or want to contact me,u call me via 91234567.

Your Regards,

Ali Baba

dibilo SG

Hi Teacher In-Charge,

Your Regards,

Ali Baba

horrible.

To: Teacher In-Charge,

I,Ali ba ba, parent of obma from sec 4c would like to inform you that my child will not be attending his basketball training (assuming its a one time training) this saturday. This is because your basketball training session clashes with his tuition timeslot which is from (insert time). Should you have any more enquires, you may contact me on my mobile at 91234567. Thank you for your kind understanding.

Regards,

Ali Baba

Eyelessz SG

It is terrible helping him forge a letter of excuse. Its is imperative that he sets his attitude right to achieve academic success.

MyNameisNas SG

It is terrible helping him forge a letter of excuse. Its is imperative that he sets his attitude right to achieve academic success.

X2... His first post somemore...

charlize SG

Actually it is more realistic if you left all the grammatical errors in the note.

But that's just me.

enoassap SG

Is this supposed to be for some homework or something or is he really writing that letter to skip his CCA? lol

LatecomerX SG

Hi Teacher In-Charge,

Your Regards,

Ali Baba

Why you never ask your English teacher for help?

dibilo SG

lol i am banking on the possibility that his parents doesnt know how to write an excuse letter and they asked TS to write one for them to sign. Anyway their number is in the letter. If he is lying then his parents will get to know it too.

Hello Kitty SG

no wonder u nit tuition.

sec 4 liao, engrish still so lousy.

HollowGrowl SG

wa can spell thread title correctly but cant write a simple letter

SBS n SMRT SG

Hi Teacher In-Charge,

Your Regards,

Ali Baba

Dear Teacher In-Charge

I, Ali baba, parent of (Insert Name) from Sec 4, (Class, register number) will like to inform you that my child will be unable to attend basketball tranning for Saturday (Insert time). This is because my son is having tution (Insert time) and i am, at my uptmost effort, unable to change the timeslot. I am most willing to answer you quries at the following methods. (HP number, e-mail, hse phone) Thank you for your understanding for the inconvinence caused.

Yours sincerly

Ali Baba

I hope you do not send out this letter, tution is important, i know, but you seriously cannot forsake CCA for tution, u pay for that tution, is the teacher need to accomodiate you, not the otherwise, if the latter is true, please find another tution teacher. Period.

Hello Kitty SG

Dear Teacher In-Charge

Yours sincerly

Ali Baba

sollie bt ur engrish oso not beri gd leh.

eagle SG

Dear Teacher In-Charge

Yours sincerly

Ali Baba

I highlighted spelling mistakes... :D

Anyway, if it's tuition centre, have to accodomate the timeslot mah...

And.... if the tuition teacher is very effective and popular... more likely you have to match his/her timeslots too...

Master -_- SG

Dear Teacher In-Charge

Yours sincerly

Ali Baba

u really need more help in english than TS...

Miss Tiny SG

sollie bt ur engrish oso not beri gd leh.

x2. only more words and a lot of spelling errors.