Started with a short story about how a handicapped lady was
begging me for food and I happened to have some leftover bread, so
I offered her the bread. As days went by, it's as if I was obliged
to giving her food and finally after 1 week she told me, "do you
have anything else other than bread because my daughter and I are
sick of eating bread already."
Then I started my expository which things like: We may shake our
heads in digust at the lady in the story, but then it is our human
nature for us to be greedy. Without greed, we would not have a
comfortable life etc etc etc.
And ended off with something like: It is not wrong to be greedy
as long as we use our greed as a pushing force for us to become
better persons, just like how I am greedy for high marks for this
composition.
Lol not bad. I ended with " Only then did he realised how greed
had reduced a man to nothingness. " Quite of crappy lol.