Given the immature and childish replies by this forum, it
are conclusive. We were thinking
of featuring your discussion forum on our website but after 4
replies, we decided against it . I never intended to flame, only to
say what our bus fan club thinks. Immature and childish (in some
cases, brainless) replies are
posted. Stumbling to this
forum is a terrible mistake. Of
course, that will not stop us from coming to Singapore next week,
but you (buses sgforums) will not have the honor to host us. Regret
it or not, such a great chance for international interaction
is wasted. I hope that the
moderators you bunch
childrens choose not be like an
idiot wasting his time moderating a forum that chased away an
international bus fan group.
I have highlighted some minor errors in the above passage. There
are also some sentences with weird phrasing. Please do take note of
those mistakes when you write your essay 
