Wah, thanks to you tube, technology is definately catching up
with time, now can post video clip to seek help, compared to few
years back, all thru words.
BTW, 1 video shot can tell everything loh, improving in bowling
msut be taken in progression steps.
Below's my humble observation on yr play.
1. You took 6 steps for yr delivery, 1 + 2 is dummy steps, try to
correct that to either 4 or 5 steps, which is more efficient and
easier for others to coach.
2. From what I see, U are quite a distant away from the foul
line(1-3 feet?), that could be the reason casuing youy delay in yr
delivery, u may wanna try to finish yr shot as close to the foul
line as possible.
3. Think of a smooth and continuous folw of movement in yr swing,
that "pause" of your current style will costs you lots of
inconsistency, if it has already becomes a habbit, try ask yrself
why do you post this mssg?
Lastly, the best way to improve is to learn from a bowling coach.
He can correct you better.
In bowling or in life, its will always be our attitude that make a
difference, if we are always humblle and be willing to listen,
observes, learn, explore and try, anything is possible.
Cheers and happy bowling