Ok here are my thoughts. You probably want to put more time in
setting up the stills. Theres not enough movement IN the wire
itself man, its very obvious youre moving them to a slightly
different location each shot. Add a bit of sophistication by
tangling the wire to a slightly different settings but maintain the
flow in the movement AND the tangling in action.
You probably want to make the wires look like a snake when moving.
I can see that movement in the plug head where it seems its
struggling to move forward but what about the tail section?
I also saw ur hands on some shot, wtf is that man? And whats the
headphone appearance for? Is that a reason? Wouldnt it be better
if you sequence a fight between something which is of less
tangled nature and the wires? The scene will finally end with the
wire being kicked into the bin by his opponent, and maybe leave the
head section hanging by the edge of the bin.
