so yeah...
help me wif my graduation speech and presentation of stupid
animal abuse 
dis thread will oso b a hwk thread for us to post questions we
dunno!
down wif hwk forum!
PPl rememebr 1st and last things beetter
Every para must have topic sentence for u to easy organise ur
essay, forums talking style wont work
Ladies and gentlemen, firstly i will like to thank you for coming
today and listen to my talk. [Now take and idea from ur that
sentence and write ur next] My talk[the point] is about graduation
and the help i gain from the school community.
next, pick a point from the first and link it up talk about
the help u gained. Like i haev mentioned, my school, is made up of
friends and teachers, principal who helped me with my academic and
social life. For example, mr arse have told me i cannot make it,
that motivated me to show him he is wrong....he is a arse...or sth
liddat, list some more examples.
then pick a point again, my powerful learning cannot take place
with out a condusive learning, then say about learning, like planes
would oweis fly pass and disturb u, but due to your concerntartion
power...u can concertrate
next para can be about graduation. againpick a point and
link With regards to graduation, i feel that it is very sad to
leave the school as missed the facility and environment here. Now,
dun go out of point, say sth like: most importatnt ly, i miss
the teachers here.
u noe alreayd, grab a few point from the para and link, but dun
go out of point
get ur teacehr to read for sentence strcture and grammar
