Good morning everyone!
I need some help for this coming chinese
new year so that I can converse a little with my
grandmother. I need some help to correct my translation, I can
roughly understand the language when they talk, but I can hardly
converse well.
From English to Hokkien:
There was a call from China
for you. It was from them (your brother). They wish you Happy
Chinese New Year, gong xi fai cai and shen ti jian kang. They
asked about your health . They said everything is
good over here (in China) and I told them that you
are in healthy and happy.
My weak attempt translation:
Wu li eh tian wei, si thiong kok ka lai eh. Si li eh xio di. Yi
ka li kong sin ni koi lok, keong hee huat chai, xin tei kian kong.
yi woon li ho bo. thiong kok hee bin ho ar. wa ka yi nang kong li
ma si jin ho, tak li jin hua hee 
Every year CNY, there will be a call from my relative living in
China. It's my grandmother's brother calling Singapore to
wish her. I hope someone can help me translate into hokkien
so that I can pass the message to my grandmother easier. Please
correct me if there's any mistake or can make the greeting even
better.
Really appreciated!
From English to Malay:
Thank you for taking good care
of my grandmother. You did a great job. I know it's tough and
really appreciate that from the bottom of my heart. If there's
anything that you need help, you can call me. I will come and see
you again in a few weeks time.
This one I really have problem translating. I can understand
some malay, but I cannot converse in malay. 
As for the Canto part, I already found out the translation
already 