Originally posted by ChingAlvin:
I start the ball rolling then.. but no need teach me chinese...
mine i think good enough...
Hi all,
I am male [b]coming from ( in this case, you should ommit
"coming" since you have been here for a year already.) China and
currently studing (studying - thats a spelling
error.. and studying MBA?!?)MBA in Singapore. I have been
here about 1
year. (I have been here for about a year would be more
appropriate as the structure doesnt really look right)
Probabily I(probably - thats a spelling error)
will find a job and work here after graduation (I
cant pinpoint, but structure looks wrong to me...). Speaking
a flunent (fluent, sould ommit "a") English
is
very important for me. So I'd love to improve my oral English with
your help. In return, I will
teach you Mandarin and Chinese culture. If anyone is Interested in
language exchange please email
me at [email protected] and I will reply you ASAP.
Happy new year & Thanks
Tiger
Dont worry about english! as long as it sounds right, most probably
you are right...although we all use short forms. [/b]
ChingAlvin, thank you so much for your help. All my close
friends are speaking Mandarin that is why my English is so poor. I
have already correct all the errors. Following are the second
edition.
Hi all,
I am male from China and currently studying MBA courses in
Singapore. I have been here for about 1 year. Probably I will find
a job here after graduation. Speaking fluent English is very
important for me. So I'd love to improve my oral English with your
help. In return, I will teach you Mandarin and Chinese culture. If
anyone is Interested in language exchange please email me at
[email protected] and I will reply you ASAP.
Happy new year & Thanks
Tiger
