Title: Seriously, I think I am the best in
SGF
- Should be "I think that I am the best"
Sorry for sounding a tad too obnoxious, but I thought that
it's better for me to inform to all of
you that I greatly surpass each and everyone of
you.
- Both 'thought and 'it's' are different tenses. It should be
either "but I think that it is better" or "but I thought that it
would be better".
- The word 'to' as seen here is not required.
- The words 'every one' should be used instead of 'everyone'.
- 'I greatly surpass each and everyone of you' - In what? Being
obnoxious?!?
Be it mental, physical or emotional.
- As pointed out, it is not a proper sentence. It should be linked
with the last sentence of the previous paragraph with a
comar.
I have, the best brains that anyone in SGF can
offer
I have, the most strength when it comes to sports
And I also am, the most tactful amongst all others in SGF
- Should be "I have the best brains that anyone else
from SGF can offer."
- All comars in these 3 sentences are not required; fullstops are
missing after each sentence.
- Absolutely no need for a seperate paragraph for each of these
sentences since they're all boasting about your qualities, unless
this is in speech form, and has a break after each sentence for the
effect.
Sorry to boast about my qualities, but i cant keep
it to myself any longer. I need someone to rise up to the challenge
and win me in any aspects.
- 'i' should be typed as a capital letter.
- 'cant' is missing an aprostophe.
- Since there is the word 'any', 'aspect' should be used and not
'aspects'.
Also, I think my use of the
english language is impossibly
great, and although sometimes my posts do not justify my
nom de plume(smartest one alive), but in reality I am the
best.
- Inappropiate usage of the word 'impossibly'.
- 'usage', not 'use'.
- The E in English should be a capital letter.
- Missing a comar here. It should be "but in reality, I am the
best."
Sorry guys, for using near perfect
english, and the doing away of
the "lahs' and "lors"
- First comar is not needed.
- As metioned before, the E should be a capital letter.
- 'the' is redundant.
25 mistakes so far in this short simple text. It seems that your
'near-pefect' English has a long way more to go before becoming
perfect. 
