reminds me of the days when i was trying to crack my mind up for
some really twisting and ORIGINAL narrative story for my O lvl
English...
and the plots of these story strongly resembles that of the model
essays u can find from those 'Model Essay Book' sold in Popular.
Really twisted, especially when nearing the end of it.
Good effort for the plot! Totally original. But might mislead one
that the author is a psycho!!! 
haha.
Need improvement on grammer and sentence structure though... if the
author is contemplating to really score for compos. (:
