if you are going to use this form of writing in your O level
english paper
then i seriously advise you to drop O level english language paper
as well
between, secondary school paper, and O level english paper is
totally different
you may be able to score A1 in your secondary school paper
doesn't mean that you can score A1 in O level english as well
i seen cases in my secondary school, where people score A1 for
their english paper, but when it comes to O level........ D7,
C6,C5
your writing skills, need to improve alot...................
