Erm, honestly speaking (as a regular blogger), i feel that ur
words is a little too big..
And the background color/image, feels a bit old.. Although the
color fits in well, i think u can adjust blog's color into a darker
ones (eg. red). As for the bg image, can choose a more towards
simpler, nicer type of image..
Btw, put more images instead of words.. 
P.S: the below the Singapore Blogpshere the link (like Blogs, Top
50 etc), u can try using images to link (u can create ur very own
image (just to link))..