Hazard To Society

QX179R SG

all I can say is please drive safely..
most of the motorists have no patience..

want to reach their destinations fast fast
but if anything happens its either they reach late or probably won't ever reach..

TheDream SG

I think you've got a good grasp of the language and I like your candid style of writing - doesn't distance yourself from your readers.

But I think to be a successful journalist or writer takes more than that - you have to interest your readers. That's what sells papers or books, I guess.

Allow me to be blunt, but your "article" was rather boring to me. I think I lost interest by the second or third paragraph.

So my suggestion (not that I'm one to give advice), is that you need to capture your readers. Either build up and draw in your readers, or write on something that people really interests people.

Just my 5 cents

linwei20 SG

all I can say is please drive safely..
most of the motorists have no patience..

want to reach their destinations fast fast
but if anything happens its either they reach late or probably won't ever reach..

"its either they reach late or probably won't ever reach.." This phrase is extremly good for all motorist! We have to learn this pharse!

sinicker SG

sometimes it's important to know that yes, you may have spent a few thousands earning your driving license... but if you cannot control the vehicle well and anticipate all the possible situations that may arise on the roads... please don't drive.

and i find it sad that people can do not know their way around in our small island of singapore and make last minute decisions to exit the expressway or make sudden turns... dangerous.