This is my first attempt in trying to write a erotic story. What
I want is a emotional, sensational, yet erotic ( i hope) story
about sex (what else?), not that kind of 'oh-fuck-me-hard-bastard'
kind of story. It is just the first few paragraph, not much
'action' yet...
Sylvia smiled as I held her hand and led her to my bedroom.
There, I pulled her close to be and look into her sky-blue eyes,
hugging her so closely I can feel her breast touching mine through
the T-shirt.
Nobodys home, my parent had gone oversea and will not be back
for another week. I whispered into her ears, licking her ear lobe
with my tongue after that.
So? She replied, her eyes full of mischief while she place both
her hands around my waist.
You know very well what were going to do. I kissed her lips
passionately, trusting my tongue inside her mouth and tasting her
sweetness. I could feel passion inside her and she too lick my
tongue with hers.
Sylvia and I had been together for about four years, since we were
in Secondary Three. Both of us are now currently studying in the
same JC. While both of us really do love each other, weve an
unspoken understanding that both of us yearn for each others body.
In short, we are virgins trying to loose our innocence to each
other. And there is no better time than now to satisfy that lust in
us.
Lets make it very slow, I want our first time to be memorable
and exciting. Make it very very slow, will you? Sylvia asks.
Ive an idea! Pulling myself off her, I went over to a drawer
and took out a brand-new digital video recorder, capable of
recording up to four hours long. Placing the recorder on a tripod
beside my bed, I said, now this would make it more memorable and
exciting, dont you agree?
Sylvia smiled at me again as I wrap my arms around her slender
waist and resume our passionate kissing. Her silky long hair
brushes against my cheek and I could feel her body heat radiating
off her. Our breathing was beginning to get shallower and faster.
As I gaze into her sky-blue eyes, I sink deeper into passion.
Already, I could feel my penis erecting beneath my jeans.
Slowly, my kiss travels from her chin to her neck and up again to
her forehead. She kept her eyes close while allowing my lips to
touch her fair skin, hugging me closer to her. The smell coming
from her is so nice, so indescribable. Shes just so
beautiful.
Allow me to be part of you I moved my palms upwards to the
underneath of her armpits, beside her breast, allow me to feel
you.
Please, I really need you to comment on it. Only serious comment
please, I'm being very serious here.
