Kindergarten

DeadPoet SG

I was referring to "open umbrellas in the rain" unless the mothers enjoy getting wet.

Bluesky_Liz SG

Thanks DP, it is exactly the kind of help I need. I'm not very good with describing complex scenes.

Open umbrellas -- (edit: got it) you've made me want to rethink it just by pointing it out. I might try to show the mothers' excitement and/or anxiety using something else less boring and predictable.

Thanks thanks thanks again!!

Bluesky_Liz SG

Yeah you are right. I missed that.

Bluesky_Liz SG

So did I (in primary school though not in K). The teachers didn't cry, but I think my parents did.

tare SG

hehee.. thank u.. it's been so long since i wrote anything, even if it's my usual silly poems Laughing

DeadPoet SG

You are most welcome. Mr. Green

DeadPoet SG

Well when the mood is right, write! Mr. Green

DeadPoet SG

If you are interested in describing the various emotions, let me know. Wink

tare SG

my mood recently is HORRIBLE... and i hate to write depressing poems or tat which will expose too much abt myself Laughing

Bluesky_Liz SG

Used to be able to write really rip-your-guts-out rants, but now...not so. After a while I realise it didn't help in any way, and only made me very emo and more depressed than ever. Mr. Green

Bluesky_Liz SG

Will keep your offer in mind. Cool

InnoHippo SG

signs of maturity Very Happy

DeadPoet SG

Having fun? Laughing

Bluesky_Liz SG

Just rolling along I suppose Laughing

DeadPoet SG

Look out for that ... clift ... Twisted Evil

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