Originally posted by DeadPoet:
[quote]Originally posted by MoonIce:
[b][b]Out In
Somewhere
O how I love to fall in love
To know what it is like
Where I had never felt before
Looking forward, never back
Never the present
But in front of me
C:
Like the teas raining on me
I felt their soul
Feeling their rays of love
Closing my eyes, I will see you with my heart
There you are, out in somewhere
Waiting for me to find you
But when I finally found you
You stand out of my grasp
Out of my circle, but yet within my life
Tantalizing me,
Deepening my sense of contentment
C:
Like the teas raining on me
I felt their soul
Feeling their rays of love
Closing my eyes, I will see you with my heart
There you are, out in somewhere
Waiting for me to find you
Waiting for me to find you
Remind me of the song 'Somewhere out there'. 
Questions: Are you looking for your love? Or you already have
someone in mind but she is out of your reach?
I like your C, very lovely, very romantic. But what is 'teas'? Is
it tears? If it is tears, 'raining on me' will sound a bit strange.
Unless you are like crying out of control (happened to me before),
your face covered with tears.
Hope you won't mind. Just my comment.
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heck spell wrong liao *correcting*
