Originally posted by MoonIce:
Was looking out of the huge windows in class when this come
to mind yah 
[b]Evening
Blue
The sun had set
Yet it is not yet darkness
Instead it is blue gradually darkening
And growing dimmer and dimmer
The stars are out too
Who say they shine only when all is dark
In the dim blue sky
the stars glow struggling to give off lights
Which are dear to us
Out there in the darkening sky
the moon shone brilliantly like a pearl
All too fast, the sky changed
From blue to dark blue
And from dark blue to darkness
Still the moon and starts lighten up the sky
So it is not total darkness
To have seen the blueness turn to dark
Is a wondrous way of Mother Nature showing us one of her many
beauty and face
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When we see clouds, we don't just see clouds, instead we may
think about our life, of someone, etc.
For example, after my grandparents passed away, whenever I see
clouds, I see their faces and I think about where they are now, are
they happy, etc.
I really like Nature poem. The stars in your poem remind me of us,
ordinary citizens of this country. We may be 'struggling to give
off lights', but these lights 'are dear to us'.
It is also very descriptive, although I am not there, but I can
easily imagine what you've seen.
Good work! 
