ok la..typical teenage love story...relives some of our past
memories...lolz..
ok comments..If your story is 4 forumers like us to read, then i
think its okay. But if you are intending to write this story into a
book for publication, i think your english still have room for
improvement. The usage of the language is too simple bah. Anyway,
it all depends on your objective of this and i will be more than
happy to read on and provide my feedback if needed. Cheers
haha, no la. this my 1st time. just do for frens/ forumers 2
read de : D