Seoti Ah:
The post-mortem examination revealed that her cause of death
was boredom. (no
"by"!)
According to her next of kin, she had claimed to be suffering
from an illness,
superior indefinite boredomness triflucuous, for the past
few days. (you need a second comma after the illness name).
This illness was widespread over the
country, where many country folks have (folks plural ..not
"has" ) been made jobless, due to the sudden economic
downturn. Her last text message was to someone nicknamed Yang
Guo.
. Thanks dude. Though not perfect but better then
TS one.
