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Q: write about a time when you went for a holiday but it turn out
to be disapointing...
Almost every inch was filled with clothes. That old luggage of mine
was so full that it might explode anytime. I was trying my very
best to make use of every single inch that the old luggage can
contain. The thought of travelling outside my homeland for the
first time is making me go crazy. The highly excited me was jumping
around like a monkey which just could not wait for the time to
depart for the vacation.
It was finally time to carry our big and packed bags into the van.
My uncle double checked that everything required was brought along.
This is the beginning of my journey outside my homeland for the
first time. Rays of the sun shone down fiercely on my uncle's car
while the then gentle wind of the air-conditioner caressed our
faces.
The thought of the cool theme park, wonderful food and great
climate Genting offered raced through my mind. i heard the air
temperature of Genting is as cooling as the temperature in my
uncle's car.
We passed the causeway which divided Singapore and Malaysia to take
a break in a restaurant. The restaurant was quite dirty but as we
could not find any other decent places to eat, hence we ate there.
After eating, we continued our journey and were finally able to
reach our destination, Genting.
After we booked in into a hotel room, I was stuck inside the
washroom for quite sometime. It was not because of their washroom
being nice, but due to a stomachache i was having. I felt very ill
that day and my uncle brought me deleted a doctor. The search for a
doctor deleted took quite a long time as we were unfamiliar with
the place.
After the doctor's injection, i slept in the hotel and that was how
i spent my first day outside Singapore. When i was asleep, my uncle
went to the casino and without me as I was underage. Another reason
was because I could not leave my bed and so he took the chance to
go there
When I woke up, I felt so energized that I could take down a tiger!
Maybe this energy was stored deleted when I was resting. There was
one thing on my mind -- The Theme Park. I got into my outfit and
went off to the hotel lobby without my uncle. The exit of the hotel
was open and I saw something I had never expected.
Water drips from the sky down to the ground i was standing. This
also means that the Theme Park will be close. I was so sad that i
went back to my room and at last, called my uncle to wake up. I ask
him what should we do now since we would not be able to enjoy
ourselves in the Theme Park. He suggested the Arcade.
I then went to the arcade with my uncle and play there. There not
nothing really special about the arcade and i was not in the mood
of playing as i has miss the fantastic theme park i am dreaming
about.
Soon dark started to fall and we went back to our hotel. The next
morning, we went back to our home. This was the ever first holidays
i ever went and with such a great disappointment.
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