Originally posted by popikachu:
compo is out!!!
can help me check see got any gramma mistake or spelling mistake? i
am sure got alot de...
comments are very welcome too!!!
Q: write about a time when you went for a holiday but it turn out
to be disapointing...
Almost every inch was filled cancel
the words herewith clothes. That old luggage of mine was so
full that it might explode anytime. I was
trying my very best to make use of every single inch that the old luggage
can contain. The thought of travelling outside my homeland for the first
time is making me go crazy. The highly excited me was jumping
around like a monkey which just could not wait for the time to
depart for the vacation.
It was finally time to carry our big and packed bags into the van. My uncle double
checked that everything that is
needed to bring along was taken.
This is the beginning of my journey outside my homeland for the first time. Rays of the
sun shone down fiercely
on my uncle's car while
the then gentle wind of the
air-conditioner blew our faces. The sky was clear.
Wild imagination started to race
through my mind. The
thoughts of the coolest theme park, of their wonderful food
and the best temperature Genting would have. The air temperature of
Genting is as cold as the temperature my uncle's car air
conditioner is giving out.
We passed the causeway which divides Singapore and Malaysia
to take a break in a restaurant.
The restaurant was quite dirty but as we could not find any other decent places
to eat, hence we ate there. After
eating, we continued our journey
and were finally able to reach our
destination, Genting.
After both of us booked in into a
hotel room, I was stuck inside the
washroom for quite sometime. It was
not because of their
washroom being nice, but
was due to a stomachache I had. I
felt very ill that day and my uncle brought me to see a doctor. The search for a doctor was took quite a
long time as we were unfamiliar
with the place.
After the doctor's injection, i
slept in the hotel and that was
how i spent my first day outside
Singapore. During my sleep, my
uncle went to the casino and(cancel this
"and") without me as I was
underage. Another reason was because I
could not leave my bed and
so he took the chance to go
there.
After I woke up, I felt so energized that I was able take down a tiger! Maybe this
energy was stored yesterday when I was
resting. There has only been one thing on my mind. The Theme Park. I
got my outfit and went off to the
hotel lobby without my uncle's
accompanying me. The exit of the hotel,(cancel this "comma") was open and
I saw something I had never expected.
Water droplets were dripping from
the sky down to the ground I was
standing on. This also
meant that the Theme Park will be
closed. I was so sad that
I went back to my room and
then called my uncle to wake up. I
asked him what should we do
at that time since we would not be
able to enjoy ourselves in the Theme Park. He suggested the
Arcade.
I then went to the arcade with my uncle and played there. There was nothing really special about the arcade
and I was not in the mood
to play as I had missed going to the fantastic theme park
that I had been dreaming
about.
Soon, it was evening and we went
back to our hotel. The next morning, we started on our trip home. This was the ever
first holidays(cancel the "s') I
had ever went and was met
with such a great disappointment.
done in a rush...others can check for my errors...gtg...
